Blog 7

I thought some of the best work came from the students that I know edited the most. For instance; Danielle Weiss's Artist statement was truly gripping, but it wasn't at its final stage until the last draft. She must have revised it 6 or 7 times with teachers and students including myself to really make a powerful piece. This gave her an edge as well as different perspectives. I definitely want to follow in her footsteps as well as anyone who got extensive help from the teacher. I will take advantage of that next time
Here is her blog: http://daniellewhumanities2011.blogspot.com/

I also thought the loop method worked very well for some people including Naxiely's paper. She created an anecdote that was very relate-able to the reader. The body paragraphs had depth but the end really brought the paper back to the initial anecdote with great flow.
http://humanitiesforjunioryear.blogspot.com/