1) The loop method has benefited me in my writing in a couple key ways. I reversed my intro and turned it into an anecdote. I feel that it has really helped bring a relative story, that many have gone through, and gave vivid details to connect with the reader. I tried to "write to the depth of the reader" in the body paragraph when I started to talk about Dr. Seuss' early life. although, I do think I can make the outro a bit more interesting and bring it back to the intro.
2)I would like my editor to focus on my final paragraph as I think it needs more of a statement to really leave a message to the reader. Also I would like my editor to try to cut down the biography of Dr. Seuss.
3)There is a long list of things that I would like to work on as a writer. The top two virtues that I am striving for at the moment are to be a more elegant writer as well as a more powerful writer. What I mean by powerful is that I want to be more persuasive and passionate writer. Going along, a writer who could convey his argument without being too abrupt.
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