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Wednesday, December 14, 2011
Blog 28
Thursday, December 8, 2011
Blog 27
Act 1 scene 7 stood out to me as a turning point in the play. The characters around Tyler, the mom and dad, wore down Tyler's sanity, as if the rest of his day wasn't bad enough. The difference between writing it and seeing it performed is astronomically different. The original plan was to make it a transitional scene only, give the parents a few more lines because we liked them so much. It turned into a big part of the play, where Tyler's sanity had reached its capacity and he turns into a jerk. And after what he went through, who could blame him. Confusion, anger, sadness, and embarrassment make for a bad day.
I have a couple tips for the actors that I will relay to them everyday up until the actual play. One being that we are performing at the LA JOLLA PLAYHOUSE! I am concerned that they don't understand the opportunity that they are being given. Many dream of performing at such a place, but never make it and the actors are handed a free ticket. My other comment would be to get more excited. This is a musical and the final song is being performed without emotion. This is not acceptable. But I am confident that they will pull through and I am excited to see the performance.
Tuesday, December 6, 2011
One Week-Two Days Away
Although there are many rough patches in our class, there is much to be proud of. I am proud of our actor's ability to take critique so well. During every rehearsal, both actors and actresses have been critiqued over and over again. For them to take the criticism and use it to strengthen their acting abilities has been surprisingly been outstanding especially for those first time actors. I am proud of the people working outside of their job . The people who take it upon themselves to help others in their down time rather than just sit around. I am proud of Cara and myself for getting through the tough times and putting in many late nights to finish the writing of the play.
The La Jolla Playhouse is one of the most prestigious theaters that lead to Broadway. It is an honor for my partner and I's vision to be put on display there. I am so very excited for next Thursday. I am excited for my family and friends to see what I have been doing for the past two months (possibly more). I am excited to see the look on the actor's faces when they see the intensity of the Playhouse-I think it will motivate them even more so knowing what performing that the La Jolla Playhouse means. I am also excited for this to be over!
Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Post- Site Visit
Tuesday, November 29, 2011
Pre-internship Visit
Thursday, November 17, 2011
Blog 23
Although there have been problems throughout the semester, there is quite a lot to be thankful for. I am thankful for my peers that have graciously edited my work and thankful that they can rely on me to be a good editor as well. I am thankful for the opportunity to be proven wrong in my previous assumptions about writing and about how the work environment really is. I am thankful for a sarcastic teacher who has spent countless hours helping me with my job as the playwright and opened my eyes up to different perspectives-but most of all I am thankful for my supportive friends and family who have helped me through the first semester of my junior year.
Wednesday, November 16, 2011
Blog 22: Script, Playbill
Tuesday, November 8, 2011
Blog: 21 Federal Theader Project
Thursday, November 3, 2011
Blog 20
Before:
Jose: I think he did
After: Jose thinks he did
This may not seem like a big change at first but, we changed Jose's character, making him talk in the third person. It makes for a more interesting character. It also adds to the absurdity that is our play, making Tyler even more freaked out about his whereabouts and the situation that he is in.
Our original ending was cheesy, ending with an original song by Tyler while all the other characters join along with him. We changed this to Tyler singing his original song but everybody not accepting him, making him the outcast once more. The final scene, rather the final line is based off of Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead, exclaiming, "There must have been a moment in the beginning when I could have said no-but somehow, I missed it. It allows for much more interpretation from the audience.
We also added a scene to add more layers to the play. This scene consists of a drama class, led by Mr. Dri Dri, that the class comes up with a plan to make Tyler learn his lesson. The following scene questions whether they are just acting within the play or being themselves.
Tuesday, November 1, 2011
Blog 19
Arthur Miller's The Crucible, describes some of the best character driven plot that the country has ever seen. In our play, cara and I want and had to create some of the most interesting and weird characters that we could, but also having their personalities drive the plot.
Our job as playwrights was to create a play in a very collaborative process. The creators of South Park make and throw ideas out constantly as they work together to make a great episode each week. We are forced to use our individual talents to work together to create a cohesive and entertaining play.
Steven Colbert has a team of writers behind him. They write constantly, as should us playwrights. If We get enough ideas out the product should be very enjoyable for the audience. Also he uses satire, sarcasm, and many other traits to further illustrate his points about politics.
Thursday, October 27, 2011
Honors Essays
Wednesday, October 26, 2011
BLog 17
Specifically I love how nobody really seems to get it but Tyler. Which raises and interesting question: Who is really crazy? Imagine if a new student came to high tech high and all he knew was singing and dancing. He wouldn't understand our culture and we wouldn't understand his nature. this happens throughout the play where Tyler really feels alone. He needs the audience to feel his pain. He looks at the audience many times when complaining. Not only because he can't look elsewhere, but he needs sympathy. And the audience feels it.
Scene 2 page 6
Donny: He's Joshing, I dumped her. She meant nothing to me, there are plenty of fish in this gigantic frickin sea! I can have who I want, they all know I'm the best.
TYLER: Why is this happening?!!!
This is when everyone is rhyming when they are talking and that is when Tyler shouts and interrupts their melody.
Scene 4 page 14
Jeannie: Talk to me moon shadow...pregnant?
Tyler: Absolutely not. (getting uncomfortable and very confused)
The guidance counselor and Tyler talk. the guidance counselor is insane making Tyler even more skeptical of his surroundings. This makes the audience also feel uncomfortable and agreeing with Tyler.
Thursday, October 20, 2011
Blog 16: Rosencranz and Guildenstern are Dead?
I am excited to further engage myself with these characters, and excited to have fun reading this play.
Tuesday, October 18, 2011
Blog 15 Digital Essay Reflection
Ofcourse I have been doing projects throughout my highschool career, but this is the first time that I was really ever pressed for time. I learned and experienced the concept of creativity under pressure. As time started to wind down for our group we started producing more ideas. This does not mean that I will always procrastinate to create this effect, but I will start creating mini deadlines for drafts so that this concept plays out again.
Monday, October 17, 2011
Thursday, October 13, 2011
Blog 14
Wednesday, October 12, 2011
Blog 13
character Hamlet's actual traits—is Hamlet trapped in the play or is the play
trapped by Hamlet? How do you know?
Narrator: In Hamlet, the storyline is driven by the revenge of almost all of the
characters including, Hamlet, Leartes, Claudius, and Fortinbras. The plot is truly
driven by revenge as a whole.
(Looking interested, hamlet and the ghost discuss his father’s murder)
GHOST
Revenge his foul and most unnatural murder.
HAMLET
Murder!
GHOST
Murder most foul, as in the best it is;
But this most foul, strange and unnatural.
HAMLET
Haste me to know't, that I, with wings as swift
As meditation or the thoughts of love,
May sweep to my revenge.
(1.5.7)
Hamlet’s traits do provoke revenge, but the play Hamlet is determined by the
revenge plot more so. On the other hand Hamlet’s traits and his yearning for
revenge did cause polonius’ death. In doing this, he provoked Leartes to cease
revenge on Hamlet. There are other characters searching for revenge as well.
Leartes wants revenge to avenge his father’s death. Claudius wants to help Leartes
in this. Also Fortinbras wants revenge for his father’s death as well, by claiming war
on Denmark.
This is what I have been working on so far. each member of our group will have created something like this by Thursday. What I have basically done is create dialog for the narrator, the actors (hamlet/ghost), and a brief answer to the question above. Some issues that have risen already is people being sick. Fred and I have done as much as we could without one of the main actors in our group, Luna. Hopefully we will see her Thursday.
Thursday, October 6, 2011
Blog: 12
Wednesday, October 5, 2011
Honors English Essay
Tomato, Tomoto; Potato, Pototo
Language as we know it is evolving. New slang terms are becoming professional terms and old, formal words are words no longer. If this is to be true, then why do we judge people based upon their dialect? Is it subconscious? When it was legal, most racial propaganda used African American dialect and pronunciation to bring their culture lower. Even today, some of us think that all southerners are not as equally intellectual because they pronounce a word differently. Lorraine Hansberry exploited this phenomena and used it to her advantage in “A Raisin in the Sun”, one of her many original plays as the dialect was a spring to deeper ideas and concepts.
Setting: 1959. Chicago, IL. Characters: ever changing. The Younger’s were an African American family living beneath oppression in the south side of Chicago. The family is completely ordinary. First off is an overprotective, good-hearted, harsh mother (Ruth) with a drunk, lying father (Walter), a religious, loving, grandmother (Mama). Not to mention Walter’s sister, Beneatha, a sassy, smart-ass, intellectual, other worldly woman. Also Ruth and Walter’s son, Travis, a exuberant, lively little kid. They are just the characters that live in the house, the others we meet along the way. They were a poor family, dependent on a check from Walter’s father’s death. This would change their lives financially. This house that they seem to fit into is too small for the family; it is breaking them and wearing them down to their boiling point. They want to move, they NEED to move if they have any chance of keeping the family together.
“Did you get all them chores done already? I ain’t see you doin’ much.” The dialog and the dialect of the family is typical of an African American family in the 50’s, Hansberry evidently tried extremely hard to capture the dialect correctly and did. Through the dialect displayed a hidden feature in the play, their pride. Many African American families would conform to the politically correct pronunciation and grammar of a sentence. Not this family. Reading the play for the fourth time I could hear their swagger and pride from their words. Always excited to speak for themselves in a way that conveyed what they were feeling.
The Younger’s were an emotional family, over dramatizing every single situation at hand. They were exciting to listen to, to read to as well. This was a surprising page turner that kept my undivided attention for long periods of time. The flow of the language kept it moving along. To my surprise there were no breaks in the story as it made my eyes wander off of the page and along to the next. As they finally received the money to buy the new house in a white neighborhood, a representative of the neighborhood, Mr. Linder tries to convince them otherwise, subtly suggesting that they were not welcome. That gave the Younger family all the more motive to move.
Too much pride is not always a good virtue as Walter showed time after time. Walter’s mission to become a man throughout the play showed how immature he really was. Pride turned into stupidity most nights. He drank himself to sleep to avoid his confronting himself and his family on skipping work and having a lackluster job. He even lied time and time again to avoid the humility and shame. While his family needed to be proud and have pride to move through life with courage, he needed to be humble.
“I am afraid you don’t understand Mr. Linder. My son said we was going to move and there aint nothing left for me to say. (Briskly) You know how these young folks is nowadays mister. Can’t do a thing with ‘em! (As he opens his mouth she rises) Goodbye!” said Mama as she proudly shows Mr. Linder to the door. This quote directly after Walters turning point to becoming a man, and his mother couldn’t be prouder. Lorraine Hansberry had a way with dialog, spending months to portray accurate dialect and pronunciation to the audience. Hansberry vividly showed how pride can change the way a person lives for the better or worse. This is an example of an overall extraordinary piece of theater. Theater that will be remembered, cherished, and used for analytical purposes for the next century as it displayed such a dark time in American History of racial discrimination. Walter in the end learns the balance between humility and pride as the two women of the house speak together, “(Quietly woman to woman) He finally came to his manhood today, didn’t he? Kind of like a rainbow after the rain…”







